Client: Dr. Raphaël Briot, University of Grenoble, France

Services: Copyediting, Line-Editing

Dr. Raphaël Briot (MCUPH UGA) is an anesthetist and a recovery expert. He is also a Lecturer at the University of Grenoble, a founding member of its PRETA research team, and an Emergency Hospital Practitioner at Grenoble University Hospital.

His research focuses on a variety of medical issues including among others the Pathophysiology of inflammatory pulmonary edema, Models on human lungs and large mammals, and Refractory cardiac arrest.

I copyedited his peer-reviewed article on “Continuous endogenous exhaled CO monitoring by laser spectrometer in human EVLP”.

My copyediting approach included:

Checking for and correcting:

• Errors in grammar, spelling, syntax, and punctuation.
• Technical consistency in capitalization, font usage, hyphenation, and spelling consistency (UK-US spelling).

 Line-editing focused on:

• Improving word choice.
• Rewriting and restructuring in conjunction with the French version of the article provided  (by adding remarks in the comment section of the word document).
• Checking the readability of the article ensuring that the reader can grasp the writer’s argumentation.
• Checking for redundancies, tone of voice, flow, and coherence.

For further publications, please, visit Dr. Briot’s website:

https://www.timc.fr/raphael-briot